October 6th, 2020 
Select two consecutive paragraphs from the 41case study project attached and complete the following:
Post the original paragraphs
Revise the paragraphs to include appropriate paragraph breaks and transitions.
Also revise to use semicolons and colons, as appropriate.
Be sure to indicate your revisions in bold type.
Also Review the original and revised paragraphs of the classmate attached and comment on the effectiveness of the revisions.there are few thing to consider review the instruction attached.
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