Review the attached essay and please comment on the following and be as specific as possible. Play “devil’s advocate” if that helps you point places for possible improvement.
– Thesis: Clear, compelling, unexpected, “right-sized” (good fit with analysis)?
– Analysis: Clear organizing contrast and sub-categories? Specific textual evidence?
– Organization: Easy to follow? Clear organizational pattern and topic sentences?
– Conclusion: Clear wrap-up and take-away? Justification for why it matters or connects with a larger research questions?