October 27th, 2020 
I want these pages added to the attached thesis that was already started.
Need references to at least 10 peer-reviewed articles. Newspapers and government pubs don’t constitute peer-reviewed articles.
Also need to add in-text citations, especially for the more vitriolic passages and terms and you need to structure the paper as shown in the appendices to our syllabus.
Topic needs to be framed and discussed in a scholarly way.
I was told the previous 6 pages are “injecting too much raw emotion and anger. That would be fine for an opinion piece but not for an academic paper. There are more objective ways to say what you want to say.” so the rest of the paper should not be worded similarly.
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